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Ahmad
It was the last day of school and one of us had to take Ahmad home for the summer. Half of the class raised their hands and Mr. D then told us to ask our parents. I ran to the phone, a drastic move, and ran over Seth as he was about to grab the phone. Got it! I quickly dialed eight and then dialed my number, as Kimaya, my good friend, kicked all the boys back. Here is what I heard and said.

“Hello, no one is available to take your call. Please leave a message after the tone…… Beep!” the answering machine said.
“Hello?” I said.
Suddenly, I was interrupted by the sudden noises of the boys saying,
“Hya! Boom! Squeak! Ah! Wah!”
“Hello! Is anyone there?” I yelled.
“Uh, hello, oh! Hi honey, how are you?” asked my mom.
“Good! Can I Take Ahmad home to live with us?” I asked.
“Uh, if I know him it’s a yes.” said my mom.
“Ok, He’ll see you at home!” I said.
I told Mr. D that it was yes and he said ok.
“Bring!” the bell rang.
I brought Ahmad home and introduced him to my family. My mom told him to get some rest on the couch while I would set the table for dinner. After that, I watched these TV shows called:
1. Waquein Bordado
2. Dysebel
3. Kaputol ang isang Awit
4. Babongon Ako Dudurugin Kita
5. Kamandag
6. Mari Mar
When Amahd woke up, Kimaya came over and we all played games.

The Return to Ahmad’s
Home
By: Arthur
It was the last day of school. There were cheers of delight. Everyone was excited because school was over and summer was here. Mr.D allowed a summer party, and Room 3 was WILD! Ahmad was teaching people had to speak his language, which was Afghanistan’s language, as a good-bye symbol - He wasn’t going to Pony Express Elementary anymore, no matter how many times he begged his mom to let him to. The party was all to fast to count. Everyone grabbed there goodies, said good-bye to everyone, and went out the door and to home. Just as I was going out, Mr.D pulled me aside.
“I have a task for you,” Mr.D said. “.Well what is it?” I asked impatiently. I wanted to go home. “Take
Ahmad home,” Mr.D said as if was nothing? “Ahmad lives in Afghanistan! That’s far away! The plane fare, too. I’m not paying.” I yelled. I didn’t mean to, but he expects me to go to AFGANISTAN! “I know, Ahmad and I will.” Mr.D said. I was bewildered. I saw no reason to go, but Afghanistan was
With cops that except money. I went with Ahmad.
I walked to the airport with Ahmad. He had told me what to do. “You need to hide from cops, and make sure you have money. They want money if they find you.” “I thought the police to protect you!” “Well, they don’t in my country.” Ahmad’s English was very well. He has been practicing with the class, and he was very good. “Well aren’t they the best cops! I bet they protect you!” I said sarcastically. “Well- “I know, I was being sarcastic,” I explained. We were at the airport, and we took the plane.
The ride to Afghanistan took a long time! Finally we got there, and I met Ahmad’s cousin, Jasmine. Ahmad’s sister wasn’t there, and I got a very unfriendly start in Afghanistan. Police came, and Ahmad and I hid. We still had to take out money, no matter how well we hid. Luckily, the police was focusing on something else. Then Ahmad asked if I want to stay in Afghanistan. No matter how much I wanted to, I said “Well, as much as I wanted to, I belong in America,”

The End

Ahmad Settles In
By Jona Mae

It was the last day of school and one of us had to take poor old Ahmad home. Fortunately, Mr. D had to take him home! (YAY!) When Mr. D heard this he was in astonishment. But of course he had to live with it. So at the end of the day, Ahmad had a car ride with Mr. D. And when Ahmad and Mr. D came home, Mr. D said , “ So Ahmad let me show you to the guestroom,” and Mr. D showed him to the guest room.
“Wow! This is such a nice room,” said Ahmad.
“Now, just settle in and I’ll call your parents so they can bring your stuff. So behave,” said Mr. D.
“Okay,” said Ahmad. And the Mr. D left the room. “What should I do now? I know!” said Ahmad. Then, he pounced on the bench and jump high until he touch the ceiling. He could jump until he was tired or until Mr. D came back in. “Wee! This is fun.”
Then, Mr. D came back in the room.
“Ahmad! What are you doing?!” said Mr. D.
“Nothing…” said Ahmad nervously.
“Well I called your parents and they said they’ll bring your stff in a half-hour.”
“Okay.”
“So are you settled in?” asked Mr. D.
“Yes.” said Ahmad.
“Okay then.” Then Mr. D left the room and Ahmad started jumping up and down again.
The End

Ahmad Stays at my House BY: Mark
It was the last day of school and one of my classmates had to take Ahmad home for one month. I knew it was going to be me. Why you ask, it’s because me and Ahmad are good friends. After school Ahmad and I went to the parking to get picked by my dad. While on the way to my house Ahmad and I watched a movie. The car stopped I knew we were here. When we got to my house the first thing Ahmad and me did was to watch TV and play some video games. At night Ahmad and me read comics until midnight. After a few months Ahmad’s parents came to take him back. I said good bye to Ahmad and they went away. At first I was a little sad when I remembered he could visit my house and I could visit his. When School came me and Ahmad had a good time.

THE END

Ahmad and Mr. D

It was the last day of school and one of us had to take (horrible) Ahmad home for summer.
“I will pick a number from this box and that person’s number will get to take Ahmad home for the summer. I even made a number for me #33.”
“I want to take Ahmad home! I want to take Ahmad home!” screamed Danny E.
“Only if your number gets picked,” said Mr. D
“Fine”
“#33, No I have to take Ahmad home.” he screeched. He cried for the whole day. I went home and gazed at Mr. D still crying in my head. I went in my room and e-mailed him.

Hi Mr. d hope u r having a good time with Ahmad

He wrote write back.

I am not. I was putting up my fence and he thought the board was a boxing bag he kicked it and all my work was on the ground. He did not have a picnic either with my wife. He buried all of our meat from the “pedestrians.” That was it when I called Dan. E. and he took him away -Mr. D

Happy Ending

Bye Mr. D, see you next year!

The End!!!

It was the last day of the year and I had to take Ahmad to Afghanistan. I was so glad that he was going there because I hated him so much. Seth was my friend I let him come on the Privet plan with me because he had never been on a plane.
After school we waited for the car to come and pick us up. When the car came he did not know which car was the car so I had to tell him it was the Jaguar. When we got to the airport we had to wait for half an hour.
When me arrived in Afghanistan he was sad but happy. At first he was sad and then happy. Half an hour later a plane blows up. After he left we went on a plane to Paris.

Ahmad Goes Home

One day our school was bombed by the Iraqi’s because they thought he was in a torture chamber. They got in a helicopter and blew themselves up. Somehow Ahmad lived and he was left out on the battlefield. An American guy found him and took him home. He went to the same school and pretty much nothing happened except the class was in ruins and everybody died except for me and Ahmad

For the summer I took Ahmad home. We took a trip to Baghdad.
The US troops made us fight in the war against Iraq. They gave us weapons and we started to fight. It was a long battle but it was finally over. Unfortunately, Ahmad was killed. I sighed and walked all the way home. I will never forget Ahmad.

The End

Nathan and Ahmad
By: William

This story is the return of Ahmad. Ahmad was in space since the first story of Ahmad. Then suddenly Ahmad went crashing to our school. He made a giant impact made a big fuss. I saw him crash and went to help him. I got to the classroom with Ahmad on my back.
“What are you going to do,” asked our teacher. Ahmad said he is going to go home with someone. The teacher chose .
So after the final bell rang, Nathan took him home. Ahmad was really annoying to Nathan that Nathan hired a fun expert called Williamson. He made Ahmad laugh so hard that his body parts came out. Then, Ahmad turned into a kangaroo named Jack. They lived together for the rest of their lives.

The End

AHMAD AND ME DIE

It was the last day of school. Ahmad went with me. When we got home, he ran away. I found him at the airport. He said he was going to Iraq. I told him that America was a great place. But He said he had already bought the ticket. So I went with him. It would be a good summer adventure.

BUT WE DIED

It was the last day of school, and one of us had to take Ahmad home for the summer. Mr. D picked me. We went home. Ahmad asked what chores he had to do. He was used to chores. I said none. We watched TV, and had a snack. Then, we put on swimsuits, and swam in my pool. After that, we took a shower, and played the wii. At night, we watched movies till midnight.
The next day, we went to an amusement park. Later we went to a museum. Then we took Ahmad for a tour around the place
One day, his mom called. He was going home to Afghanistan. The war was over. He said bye, and left.

Ahmad Goes Home
By Jackie

It was the last day of school and one of us had to take Ahmad home for the summer. My class voted the most for Mr. D, so he had to take Ahmad home. Mr. D was sad that he had to take Ahmad home. He doesn’t like kids. But he thought he would teach aliens and monsters, he was wrong. The rest of the summer Mr.D was with Ahmad. Every year he would be with Mr.D and stay with him.

The World Race
It was the last day of school and one of us had to take Ahmad home for the summer. We decided to have a little competition to see who would take home Ahmad. We Played Tetherball. We went in number order. When it came to my turn I won. Surprisingly I was winning all the matches. Now it was just that we had to race around all of North America.
I ran to a nearby racetrack and borrowed a racecar. I got in and drove. I was going about two hundred twenty mph. I first found myself in Colorado. I spent some of my money, went to sleep, and camped there for about five week.
I later went to Texas. I stayed a while then left to Washington. I got there and made the journey
Back. When I got back school was starting up again and summer ended.

The Return of Ahmad

By: James

“Ahmad goes home with James this summer” Mr. D. said. When we got home all we did was playing games eating and sleeping. After that I killed Ahmad. Then I killed my family. Then I killed myself.The End!

Ahmad’s summer
It was the last day of school and Mr. D was about to choose someone to take Ahmad home form the summer. I was hoping it would not be me because I never liked him that much. Then all of a sudden, when I was thinking about what would happen, he picked me! I couldn’t believe it, but I tried to look overjoyed. I was mad but I had to deal with it.
I was walking home and school was finally over! I was so happy, but when I saw Ahmad walking home with me, I lost my happiness. I was still wondering why Mr. D. picked me. I figured I would have to make the best of it.
A week later I was still not happy about Ahmad. Even though I was having a great time playing by myself, he kept interrupting me. It seemed like he wanted to bother me! Then I thought to myself what would happen if I tried to become friends with him.
So the next day I tried my idea and it actually worked! He actually turned out to be a cool guy. I guess it was a good idea to always try to make friends.

My Summer with Ahmad
By Sydney

I spent my summer with Ahmad. We did many fun things.
Well actually not for Ahmad. Some pretty bad things happened to him
and he was very lucky that he survived in the end. Here’s what happened.
First, we went to a amusement park. We rode the biggest
And scariest ride in CA. The bad part was that they started the ride before Ahmad strapped in. And he fell and got stitches on his head.
Next, we went to a fire station. While we were there there was a fire. When the truck drove away it ran over Ahmad. Luckily he survived,
was able to walk again, and had no brain damage.

The End !

Ahmad’s Move

It was the end of school and one of us had to take Ahmad home. I was hoping I would get picked. We had so much fun last time. So maybe I could get lucky this time…… He picked me! I was SOOOOO happy!
As soon as he came to my house, I showed him my room. He saw my stuffed animals, and he thought they were cute. Later, I showed him the Wii. We played for a long time, so we then went go jump on the trampoline. He fell over a few times, but it didn’t hurt because it was a trampoline. We played on the swings for a while too.
When we were playing with my dog, a man in a black suit with a brief case knocked on the door. When I opened the door, he showed me a badge and said,” FBI! I believe that there is an illegal immigrant in this household.” I told him,” I don’t know what you’re talking about.” He broke down the door and searched the house. Then he walked away with Ahmad. I tried to get him back. Then the man made him take an American test. Luckily he got 49-50 correct. Luckily, Ahmad passed. What a happy day.

It was the last day of school and one of us had to take Ahmad home for the summer. No one wanted to take him home. Mr.D decided to choose randomly. Everyone hid in the classroom so Mr.D took him home.

When Ahmad arrived at Mr. Davis’s house he had a atomic bomb, a torch , a katana, a pistol, and last but not least a Tie Phantom(from star wars). Then Ahmad set up his trap. Finally Ahmad was arrested.

Ahmad and Mr. D.

Ahmad finally returns. Somebody had to take Ahmad home forever.
“Let Ahmad choose,” said Mr. D.
“I-I-I choose Mr. D,” said Ahmad.
“Do I have to,” said Mr. D.
Yup,” said the class.
Then at the end of class, Mr. D. had to bring Ahmad home and we had to get a new teacher.
Soon, Mr. Davis became his slave. Mr. D. had to buy him a Wii, then a computer and eventually he ran out of money.
“Now, I want to go to Afghanistan,” said Ahmad.
“Well, no money,” said The D.
Ahmad began to cry. 
“Really,” said Mr. Davis.
Ahmad cried louder. >: ( . Ahmad ran outside and begun to talk to himself.
“Why doesn’t Mr. D. get me anything? He has a lot of money. He got me a Wii, and a computer and many more. Why can’t he afford a ride to Afghanistan,” said Ahmad.
Then Ahmad found a lot of money on the ground. He soon showed Mr. D the money, then he went to Afghanistan. Ahmad was happy but Mr. D was sad so Ahmad lived happily ever after. Plus Mr. D lived sadly ever after.

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