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8. Evan walked into the classroom and was totally surprised when. . .

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   Nathan wrote @ February 6th, 2008 at 5:07 pm

Mutant Invasion
By: Nathan Chan

Evan walked into the class and was totally surprised when there were aliens in the classroom. He was so scared he went to the boy’s bathroom. Fortunately the aliens were girls, so they couldn’t go in the boy’s bathroom. Then a boy alien went into the bathroom and was caught Evan. Suddenly, they let him go because the yard teacher was coming.
The second recess they came again, but we were in the hall where the yard teacher couldn’t see us. I saw them and I beat the aliens into shreds.
The next recess, some girl aliens captured him, so I couldn’t beat them up, so I told the yard teacher. The aliens didn’t know that the yard teacher was coming, so they just stood there holding onto Evan waiting for there fleet. We then called the military to inspect, when a huge group of aliens came in with death stars. We took back Evan thought fast and went to our secret base.
Later in the secret base, we found the Imperial Star Destroyer. Fortunately, Mark and Micah were there. All 4 of us boarded the Imperial Star Destroyer and we had the battle of a life time! Unfortunately, more and more aliens came. We called more reinforcements, but they kept on being defeated. We even had to use the A-10 Thunderbolt. We needed help.
After I remembered the Transformers, we went super speed to Mars. We found the Transformers. We asked them to help us battle. They said that we had to make a deal with them. The deal was after the battle they would want cold smoothies.
Later back in Earth the Transformers defeated the aliens. We then had a happy time drinking smoothies.

The End

   Jennifer wrote @ February 6th, 2008 at 5:24 pm

Evan
Evan walked into the classroom and was totally surprised when he saw none other than Mr. D! He was unknown to how weird his first day of the school would be. When Evan came into the classroom, Mr. D was showering each of us with candy!? He joined in the pool until it was so much, that it was even taller than him! To his desperate life, he climbed over Riley’s head. He went higher and higher only to find out that the pile grew and grew.
He screamed at the top of his lungs. Sadly, no one heard him; the class was filled with candy. In his attempt to freedom, he pulled back Elizabeth so that it would be five more feet until he reached the door.
Elizabeth stepped on Seth’s head, rushing to her life. Evan used his so called “hockey skills” to go faster so that he could get out. Evan was about to faint when, BOOM!
It was the janitor, Johnny. Luckily, all the candy went out of the room so that everyone could breathe again! Yay! Cool!
Unluckily, Johnny was slaughtered by all the candy. In our attempt to free him, he fainted. Now here is the good news, fifteen of us didn’t faint. Unfortunately, the other sixteen of us FAINTED!!! Oh well! That’s the most normal day for Mr. D’s class!

THE END!!!

   Sharon wrote @ February 7th, 2008 at 5:21 pm

Evan’s Weird Day
By: Sharon
Evan’s walked into the class and was totally surprised when he saw Mrs. Gorf in the middle of the classroom.
“Ahhhhhhhh!” he screamed like a girl.
”Hello Evan, late for class.” she said creepily.
“Yah, I mean no, I mean yes!”
“Well your lucky I’m in my happy moods I won’t turn you into an apple”
“I’m safe for know” said Evan with a sigh of relief.
“If you talk a little you are Bye, Bye” said Mrs. Gorf.
He told his friend at recess about why Mrs. Gorf was there.
“Mr. Davis had a meeting” said his friend.
He went to hide in the bathroom but he went into the girl’s bathroom.
“Ahh” said the screaming girls, running out of the bathroom.
“Whoa!” said Evan.
“You’re a girl? I think you’re shorter than a kindergarten girl” said one of the girls.
“I get that a lot” Evan said.
He walked away, insulted.
“Dingg!” rang the bell.
“Now Back to Torture with Mrs. Gorf the new reality series. “
Tyler started to talk when he came into the classroom with Seth. They BOTH got turned into apples. Riley went to Daniel B’s desk. He wanted to ask him a question about the math: the hard math. They got turned into an apple too. Micah sneezed while Mrs. Cruel was talking. He of course got turned into an apple. Evan couldn’t take it anymore.
“Ahhhhhhhh”
“Quiet”
While she tried to turn him into an apple, Jona Mae broke the computer screen. She put it against Evan’s face it hit Mrs. Gorf.
“For the record I still hate you! I did this for one reason and one reason only. Mrs. Gorf was torturing you not her.”
“Well thanks anyway” said Evan.

   william wrote @ February 7th, 2008 at 6:34 pm

Robots are Evil. EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Seth walked into the class and was totally surprised when suddenly a giant war between robots and pirates. Seth saw a pirate sword and chose his side. He quickly began kicking robotic bottom. He saw a gigantic treasure chest in a corner. When he picked it up robots began charging at him. The robot leader saw him. Before Seth could yell for help he fell asleep.

The robots carried the sleeping Seth to a prison room under their robot base. They imprisoned him in an ugly and rusty jail cell. The room looked like rats dug into the walls. The ceiling felt like it would crash down any second. He needs to get out of there fast!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Seth searched the room for any thing useful. He found a secret door full of weapons and a set of training dummies. But alas, the only weapon he found was a laser sword. He found the remote for the training dummies. After a while he broke out and the alarms rang.

Seth went up to the main floor. He had to battle a few robots, but luckily he freed all the prisoners. They battled all the robots except for one. They questioned the one they spared. The robot told them where he was. Then they killed the surviving robot just in case if he runs away.

The final battle began for peace, freedom, and meat. The armies were furiously powerfully. In just one second 19 robots died and 1 pirate died. The boss battle starring Seth and the robot boss began. The battle was so furious and tiring. Finally the battle ended. The pirates won.

The end

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