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2. Ahmad’s First Day of School

Ahmad came into your class today as a new student.  The teacher gave you the assignment of taking Ahmad around your school for the whole day. What happens in your day? What sort of things is the new student finding out about your school?

Write at least a three paragraph essay using transition words telling about Ahmad’s first day of school.



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   Alex Thomas wrote @ September 18th, 2009 at 1:02 pm

A Day With Ahmad

Its Ahmad and my first day of school. We had a picnic and you ate all the food! You were so full that you blew up! You were all over us. You got put back together. You got sent to the office for eating all the food. Went to class and Mr. Davis said “hello Ahmad welcome to our class.” We went to recess and played wall ball. That was the worst day of school.

I invited you over my house. We played video games. I taught you how to skateboard. You were better than me! We went swimming, you didn’t know how so I taught you.

That night I asked if you could sleep over. We stayed up all night and ate junk food. You didn’t know what it tasted like so I said just try it. I’m glad you moved here!

   Kaitlyn wrote @ September 18th, 2009 at 1:04 pm

My School Day with Ahmad
This morning I came to school assigned to show Ahmad and not be rude to him. When we went outside having a fun time playing outside. All of a sudden cats and dogs started raining from the sky. We had to take cover in the classroom. Everybody was going insane when we got inside. Ahmad asked me “Is it always like this?” “No.” I replied. The cats and dogs got in. We had to stand on top of our desks as the cats and dogs lay there the floor. Ahmad turned on the radio. It annoyed the cats and dogs so much that one by one they escaped through the door. We all applauded Ahmad and shouted horray for him. When he got home he had a big fat smile.

   Derek wrote @ September 18th, 2009 at 1:07 pm

A Day at Pony Express with Ahmad

I had a great day at Pony Express with Ahmad when Ahmad beat everyone in kickball. People got so jealous they told on us for no reason, but it didn’t work. We went to explore the halls because Ahmad hit three balls over the fence, so I showed him all about the school. I still feel that I should’ve done that first though. Fortunately, he was smart and already knew the classrooms already.

I showed him my former classes where I started GATE. I also told him about other classes too, like the ones we are going to be in. They are Mrs. Sanamadi and Mrs. Melvin. They all had different characteristics like different signs, less computers, less posters, and not that much computers as us. We were about to go to others, but the bell rang, so we went back to class. You can tell Ahmad didn’t want to come back to class.

When we entered the classroom, it was really dark I thought there was a blackout at first. I tried to reach the light switch, but I couldn’t find it. At last, Ahmad opened the light. We thought it was empty, but the class was under the desks and yelled, “Welcome Ahmad!!!!” After that day, Ahmad wasn’t depressed anymore again.

   Carter wrote @ October 12th, 2009 at 11:18 pm

The Day with Ahmad

One morning, I was arriving to school and I saw Ahmad sitting at a table. He seemed to be waiting for someone. I went to greet him, but he ran away. I guess he was shy, so I decided to follow him. It took a while to catch up to him and then I explained that we were in the same class. I said I could show him around school. He agreed and we went to see our classroom. After showing him his cubby, the bell rang, signaling it was time for class.

At recess, I took Ahmad to the baseball and soccer fields. He smiled and said he loved playing sports. Next, we walked across the black top to the cafeteria, but the bell rang so our tour was cut short again. Our class lined up and we walked to Room 3.

At the end of the day, Ahmed came up to me and said he had the greatest day of his life. The bell rang and we said goodbye.

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