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Tom Saves His Flock

Tom the turkey knew he had a little time to act. Thanksgiving was two weeks away, and somehow he had to save his flock. What was he going to do?

First, Tom found his family. Then, he tried to open the gate and then he got it open. Next, he looked for the farmer and sneaked away from him. His family got away from the woods, but Tom didn’t escape. His family left him all alone.

Second, Tom looked for his family. The farmer’s eyes were looking at Tom. Tom couldn’t escape. He looked for an exit, but he couldn’t find one.

Finally, Tom’s family found him. They distracted the farmer while tom went into the woods. The farmer got bored and went inside the barn. Then, Tom ran away with his family. The farmer never noticed that they were gone.

The End

Tom the turkey
Tom the turkey knew he had to act fast. Thanksgiving was two days away! He had to save his flock. What will he do!?

Ok I said pacing. How will I do it he thought? Let’s see are any of the bolts lose? I think I should ask Fen the hen. I asked Fen to help. She said “I’m a hen I don’t get ate for Thanksgiving; I’m not going to help you.”

Arrrg I said impatiently. I was think how I was going to save the flock. It was feeding time. The feeder came in. He saw that I was pecking at the fence. He said, “Get away! We don’t want you to have splinters when we eat you!”

I started to cry. I knew I had to do something quick. Thanks giving were one day away! Should we got to Turkyoplious? I don’t know said Bob.

Everyone I said we are going to need an escape plan. Everyone said we should go to Turkyoplious. I got all the turkeys together and we rammed it. It didn’t work. One more time said Bob. We did it and we were out in Turkyoplious!

Tom the Turkey One day, I was raking the leaves Thanksgiving morning. Alas, I heard a peculiar sound. It was talking. I found Tom the Turkey! So he said he wanted to fly. So Zeus popped up and brings a pair of wings. He said they were indestructible. Zues sternly said to not fly too high.
So Tom took he wings and but them on. Eventually, he flew a little to flimsy. As soon he put them on he flew magically. Tom bragged in his friends face. His friend was in frustration. Tom said “Finally, I have triumph to fly!
His friends muffled, snorted, and had an tantrum sadly. But the whole barn applauded for him. Suddenly, the wings collapsed and fell off one by one. Since his friends were not tolerant they let Tom die.

Tom the Turkey One day, I was raking the leaves Thanksgiving morning. Alas, I heard a peculiar sound. It was talking. I found Tom the Turkey! So he said he wanted to fly. So Zeus popped up and brings a pair of wings. He said they were indestructible. Zues sternly said to not fly too high.
So Tom took he wings and but them on. Eventually, he flew a little to flimsy. As soon he put them on he flew magically. Tom bragged in his friends face. His friend was in frustration. Tom said “Finally, I have triumph to fly!”
His friends muffled, snorted, and had a tantrum sadly. But the whole barn applauded for him. Suddenly, the wings collapsed and fell off one by one. Since his friends were not tolerant they let Tom die.

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